My original lawyer monologue, on the more serious end of the spectrum, feedback, advice?
Acting : LAWYER TO LAWYER - Original Law and crime monologue by Austin Oneal Jones
Owner at Ossum Films ♦ Screenwriter, Producer, Actor
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LAWYER TO LAWYER - Original Law and crime monologue
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Love your tone, the staging. I would like to see you have something to focus on while shooting to enable you to draw yourself in with absolute concentration on key moments in the dialogue. Be also great to split it with a closeup shot in the personal moments. You might want to add more light and dark in your tone and play with the pacing (slow and fast) a little more. It's all about emphasizing those points that are critical to the story or emotionally driven. Your presence is relatable, and you are enjoyable to watch. Hope this helps... Bec
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... I would take a look at Al Pacino in Heat - he is a master.
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Fantastic job portraying a crooked lawyer, Austin Oneal Jones! You use pauses really well.