Screenwriting : New Short by Apolos Israel

Apolos Israel

New Short

Hello Stage 32 Fam,

I've just finished a short (17 pgs.) and would love to get some feedback. If you have a short, we could exchange notes. I've uploaded the pdf to my profile but feel free to add and DM me. Hope to be hearing from some of you soon.

edit: Forgot to post post the logline

Love is blind but so is Matthew, and Amanda doesn't mind. But when a matching eye donor is found, Amanda is afraid her hubby won't like what he sees.  

Best Wishes  

Dylan Dawson

I would love to read it! Sadly I do not have a short to give you In return. I do however have the fisrt act of my feature completed, it's 37 pg I believe but I would just like to know how far you get and why you stop reading, unless of course you finish it.

Rutger Oosterhoff

..Sure, My short "Unholy Swap" is also 17 page long .

Rutger Oosterhoff

... Can't find your screenplay so you really do not have to read mine if you do not want to.

Rutger Oosterhoff

Got it!!

Justin Wade

I’ve only written one short for a final in film school. It admittedly was not that great. Television is more my thing. But I’d be willing to take a look at your script if you still wanted feedback.

Apolos Israel

Justin Wade All feedback is welcome. Feel free to check out the script on my profile. DM for my email to send yours

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