Just finished a pilot script for a kids animated show called, "Agents of C.O.W." and I'm very happy with it. The next step is to let it marinade for a couple of days and then rewrite where needed. The following step is coverage and then more rewrites which is a good thing. Thanks to those who were so encouraging along the way.
Here's the info:
Agents of C.O.W.
Genre: Kids Animated
Format: TV
Comps: Star Trek: Prodigy / Zootopia
Nutshell: Anthropomorphic Flash Gordon meets Mission Impossible
Logline: When a gifted calf is taken from a farm by a scorned alien cow, the calf is recruited by a group of adventurous, skilled calves to thwart an invasion of their homeworld.
Quick clarification on what the protagonist "gift" is...it's Asperger's. The story was inspired by my nephew who visited recently and whose gifts are hard to see unless you take the time to look.
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"Agents of C.O.W." is going to be a smash hit with kids and families, Leonardo Ramirez! :D I can picture the merchandise. :) Hope you get great coverage on the pilot!
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Maurice Vaughan I couldn't thank you enough for your encouragement in this. Thank you so very much, my friend. And yes, can't wait for the plush cows with jet packs!
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You're welcome, Leonardo Ramirez. Plush cows with jet packs and action figures. And bobbleheads. :D
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Maurice Vaughan You can't go wrong with bobbleheads!!
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It's wonderful. Good luck.
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Mark Deuce Awesome! Would love to hear more about it!
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Bill Albert Thanks so much Bill!
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You're right about bobbleheads, Leonardo Ramirez. Birthday party supplies, clothes, bookbags, and a lot more.
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Maurice Vaughan A book bag or brief case shaped like a jet pack would be fun to bring to meetings!
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A bookbag or briefcase shaped like a jetpack would be a great visual for a pitch meeting, Leonardo Ramirez!
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Maurice Vaughan Love that! Pure genius!
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Congratulations Leonardo, I feel touched by this story, I hope to see it in production very soon
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Hey Maurice Vaughan - I'm not sure how to incorporate this into the treatment but I just heard back from Magnetic Dreams Animation Studios and they offered their attachment to this. They're the ones that did the artwork for Jupiter Chronicles. Here's their reel: https://vimeo.com/252369357?embedded=true&source=vimeo_logo&owner=1420645
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Stephanie Munch That really does mean the world to me. Thank you so very much for making my day. All the best to you!
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The Magnetic Dreams reel is incredible, Leonardo Ramirez! Congratulations on the offer! :D
If you look at the show bible that I sent you, you'll see a Rundown/Summary page. You could make a Rundown/Summary page in your treatment, then add a note on that page mentioning that Magnetic Dreams has offered to attach itself to "Agents of C.O.W." You could also add a link to the Magnetic Dreams website and/or reel.
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Maurice Vaughan That sounds perfect! I will do just that! Thank you so much! Sage advice.
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You're welcome, Leonardo Ramirez.
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I love this, making something amazing for children. Maurice is a great mentor.
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Congrats. Writing for kids can be difficult. I”m better off with an open audience. Worked on a script that’s a spoof that kids can enjoy, but also for adults.
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@Abraham Steven Writing for kids is such a great joy. Thanks!
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Thanks William! Your project sounds fun!
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I appreciate it, Abraham Steven.
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I couldn't put into words the gratitude that I have for Maurice Vaughan in showing the kindness, support and guidance he has. That level of support is uncommon in the entertainment circles I've been a part of and it is truly selfless.
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Thank you, Leonardo Ramirez. I truly appreciate it. "That level of support is uncommon in the entertainment circles I've been a part of and it is truly selfless." That goes for Stage 32 as well. I've never been on such a supportive creative/industry platform.
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Maurice Vaughan Absolutely agree as selflessness is the guiding philosophy of Stage32!
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Your project sounds cool Leonardo Ramirez
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Thank you so very much @Josiah Bhola Hillaire !
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Congratulations Leonardo! Just wanted to add that our Family Friendly contest is currently open for submissions and this sounds like a great fit: https://www.stage32.com/happy-writers/contests/2nd-Annual-Family-Friendl...
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Leonardo: Congrats!
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@Molly Peck Thanks Molly! I will likely enter after I get coverage. Thanks so much for the prompt!
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@Phillip "Uncle Phil" Hardy - thanks so much Phil. Always grateful for your input with the Haven pitch deck. You're a gent and a scholar.
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Congratulations Leonardo!
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Thanks Gigi! And thanks for all that you do!
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Leonardo: Thanks for the kind words. You're a quick learner.