I uploaded my 85th feature script onto my loglines page on Stage 32. In a subsequent exchange of comments, RB suggested that I write a blog about how I develop my ideas for scripts. I’ll use my latest script, “Who is Betty Andrews?” as an example, but all of my scripts originate from an insatiable curiosity about life. I imagine millions of un-popped kernels of corn as “possible ideas for a script.” From all of the books in the world, I happened to be reading “Lysistrata,” an ancient Greek comedy by Aristophanes. I had read it in community college and remembered it had an anti-war theme. Its 31 pages written in 411 B.C.E. were remarkably relevant today given the wars around the globe and how little we’ve evolved as a species to eliminate violence as a means to resolve conflict. POP! I knew that Greek women protested the war by denying their husbands sex (POP). In my research, I discovered that the comedy play (POP) was banned in the U.S. from 1873 to 1930 (POP)! More interesting, I learned that the book had as much to do with women’s rights (POP) as it was about the anti-war theme.
I thought, how could I bring this important message into a contemporary film script?
I picked an average unassuming 12-year-old female for the lead (an every-girl). In this case, a bit of an underachiever who makes “mistakes” in life by using two-page summaries on Google to help with her book reports. She selects an unapproved book, “Lysistrata,” rushes her shabby book report, and gets her parents hauled into the school’s counselor’s office in the first scene (POP), where she secretly records the counselor on her smartphone (POP).
From then on, the kernels start popping left and right as everything gets blown out of proportion. There’s a social media “Mega-Influencer” who turns up the heat by sharing the story online (POP, POP, POP). There are repercussions among the lead character’s friends (POP), and at home (POP), church (POP), and school (POP). Add in a coming-of-age element to complicate the young woman’s and POP. You get the idea. I outline the characters (backstories and their arcs), and the “beats” (taking liberties with Save the Cat), and I spend a lot of time enjoying the popcorn in Act III.
In my scripts, I like to explore aspects of elevated human behavior and decision-making, typically with smart characters (often women and under-represented leads) who rely on critical thinking skills, science, and moral human nature. I draw on decades of training diverse graduate students in university settings and travels around the globe.
It may be unhelpful to know that Ideas for scripts come from everywhere: books, TV, films, work, travel, home, conversations, and experiences. That doesn’t narrow it down, and it shouldn’t. Find a kernel that POPS for you and find your reason for writing. My reasons for writing are similar to Kurt Vonnegut’s, who said, “not to get money and fame, but to experience becoming, to find out what’s inside you, to make your soul grow.” POP!
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Great topic, Tom Stohlgren. I come up with ideas by being curious about life too. I also look at photos to come up with ideas. I'll also put movies in different genres (ex: "Ace Ventura: Pet Detective" as a Thriller).
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Thanks, again, Maurice Vaughan. You are always so encouraging. It means a lot to me.
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You're welcome, Tom Stohlgren. 85 is IMPRESSIVE! On to 100!
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What a great post, Tom Stohlgren.. I recently found an old copy of Vonnegut's Breakfast of Champions and reread it. He was a genius and a great source of creative inspiration. Pop!
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Most of my ideas come from the world around me and conversations had with friends. Or internal dialogues I'm having with myself about the challenges and struggles I'm facing
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Thanks so much, Sam Sokolow and Pat Alexander. It's never easy, but it's always fun! I loved Kilgore Trout. Such characters come once per century. Some writers such as KV can never be replaced.
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Tom, thanks so doggone much for posting this...and for posting the "Who Is Betty Andrews?" script!
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Special thanks, Jim Boston! You are always there to encourage me too!
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I love this, Tom Stohlgren! If you'd be interested in writing an in-depth official blog about this for Stage 32, please reach out to me at blog@stage32.com!
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Thanks, Ashley Renee Smith -- Thanks for the compliment. How much more would you like?
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Thanks, Marsy Robinson -- and your bio is equally fun!
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Tom, you're so very welcome!
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Holy moley, Tom Stohlgren - 85 scripts!! That's awesome! Great post as well. You definitely should write a blog post. And I can so identify with "making your soul grow". I've never heard it verbalized like but it certainly rings true. That's the part that is so fulfilling for me. It's not about gain. For me, it's about answering a soul question and if I have that question then just maybe someone else does too.
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Tom Stohlgren, I'll send you an email with more information. =)
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I enjoyed your article, Tom Stohlgren .
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Thank you, Leonardo Ramirez and Anthony Murphy. Keep the fire lit.
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