Hey, thanks for the add. :)
Hi, I am currently working on a screenplay that, even if I do say so myself, will be awesome :) My only issue that I am having is that the main character is an anti-hero but my initial plan is that he will be silent and unseen (will be wearing a fully covered up outfit) for the entire movie. I am st...
Expand postHi, I am currently working on a screenplay that, even if I do say so myself, will be awesome :) My only issue that I am having is that the main character is an anti-hero but my initial plan is that he will be silent and unseen (will be wearing a fully covered up outfit) for the entire movie. I am struggling though with how best to use this usp in order to get the audience to engage with him. Any ideas???
There's another recent thread where I went on a tear about killing your darlings... I'm a big fan of taking an axe to the great ideas I had before I began the writing process. By my reasoning (which m...
Expand commentThere's another recent thread where I went on a tear about killing your darlings... I'm a big fan of taking an axe to the great ideas I had before I began the writing process. By my reasoning (which many writers probably find insane), the fact that you like this idea so much is a red flag. It means you're not objective about it, and, like a bad relationship, might cling to it out of sentimental reasons even though it could make your life (i.e., your story, in this metaphor) miserable. Or it may be the genius hook that sells the script. My recommendation: spend a few days playing with the idea of a more traditional (though still shadowy, if you like) character. Try dating a nice girl your mother would approve of, in other words. If you two don't hit it off, at least you gave it a chance, and you can go back to the crazy Emo girl with the tats. But... personal experience talking... it's very easy to be infatuated with an idea that's a drag on your script. Not saying that's the case here, but I'd kick the idea around. IMHO.
Well, what sounds "cool" doesn't necessarily mean it will be compelling nor be able to work in storytelling form. Take a look at other films and TV to see what's been done, not just for inspiration bu...
Expand commentWell, what sounds "cool" doesn't necessarily mean it will be compelling nor be able to work in storytelling form. Take a look at other films and TV to see what's been done, not just for inspiration but to see how you can bring some originality to the whole assassin story. Another TV series to look at is "Arrow." Again, best of luck!
Huge point, Danny.
I'm about to do a series of workshops with writer/actors, for creating comedy. I'm going to open with, "90% of the effectiveness of communications is non-verbal communications," which has been well researched for nearly a century. I would like to flesh that out better. What does that mean to writers...
Expand postI'm about to do a series of workshops with writer/actors, for creating comedy. I'm going to open with, "90% of the effectiveness of communications is non-verbal communications," which has been well researched for nearly a century. I would like to flesh that out better. What does that mean to writers? And I'm not necessarily talking about "show, don't tell."
Chris, I'm also a student of semiotics, particularly Umberto Eco, and I've written a lot about visual semiotics - conveying meaning without words.
Shelly, very well put.
Aaron, I agree wholeheartedly. Glad you found something useful. I will add this. Work through the emotion of a scene either first or before rewriting, and then rewrite so the words match the emotion. Then it is much more difficult to misinterpret. Wish I would do this. :)
Just a Practical F/X Artist and F/X MUA here, working most often in the horror and action genres. Worked in theatre for longer than I can remember, then switched to film in 2008. Since then I've done a ton of shorts, a little TV work, and a few feature films. I'm almost wrapped up on my directorial...
Expand postJust a Practical F/X Artist and F/X MUA here, working most often in the horror and action genres. Worked in theatre for longer than I can remember, then switched to film in 2008. Since then I've done a ton of shorts, a little TV work, and a few feature films. I'm almost wrapped up on my directorial debut, a feature called "Predatory Moon", which I wrote solely because I always wanted to do an onscreen werewolf transformation using 100% practical effects. I'm always looking for new challenges!
I love it!
Yes, Ken. www.ShivaRodriguez.com. I also have a demo video on my profile here.
Wonderful stuff I love it! Thanks for sharing.
Fellow storytellers, I'm a full time educator, storyteller, play producer, and idea wrangler and I've been reading 'the filmmaker's eye' by Mercado in an effort to expand my teacherness for a media production course I'll be teaching in the fall. Despite a few naysayers on this site who seem to think...
Expand postFellow storytellers, I'm a full time educator, storyteller, play producer, and idea wrangler and I've been reading 'the filmmaker's eye' by Mercado in an effort to expand my teacherness for a media production course I'll be teaching in the fall. Despite a few naysayers on this site who seem to think that you must have years of training & experience before you can teach, I am moving forward with extreme excitement and eagerness because video & film are an exciting means of telling a story. That is how I'm structuring the course, really. Around the story. Yes, I'll cover the basics of framing, and ratios, and other interesting elements that Mercado covers. Which is really why I'm posting here to ask about guest speakers, educational materials, promotional materials, and the like. If this is a true place to network then I'm proposing a network between industry pros (like yourselves) and public education (me) in an effort to induce real storytelling power into the future filmmakers, directors, producers, actresses, and script writers. I'll happily promote your services, films, products (within reason for all of the above of course) in exchange for education, insight, tips, tricks, access to short films you'd like an honest critique of, video chats, guest appearances, whatever the winds may throw together. I am open to just about anything that might be something I can use in my classroom to expand young minds (and, frankly, my own mind as I am more and more taken by the power of visual storytelling). I have over 5 years of theatrical production experience, 20 years of writing experience in a variety of formats & genres (happy to say I do have 2 books currently available on Amazon) so I'm not necessarily a noob to the background & foreground nuances of a production. I am new to the proper method of visual storytelling (mainly the tech stuff such as depth of field, shots & angles but I'm learning fast and am hungry for more). If you are interested in connecting, talking, being involved please message me here and we'll move on from there. Thank you kindly for your time and consideration, Aaron
Happy to meet you, Aaron!
My pleasure, Laurie. I see that you're a script supervisor...what does that entail? I teach scriptwriting to my 2nd & 3rd year theatre students. Always trying to expand my knowledge of the industry so that they're prepared when they leave.
Hey Aaron, here's brief overview of what a script supervisor's job entails, that I wrote a few years back: http://lashbo.webs.com/scriptsupervisor.htm I occasionally do guest lectures on the subject f...
Expand commentHey Aaron, here's brief overview of what a script supervisor's job entails, that I wrote a few years back: http://lashbo.webs.com/scriptsupervisor.htm I occasionally do guest lectures on the subject for film students so let me know if you need anything else.
Hello Stage32-ians! My name is Aaron Miller, I live in Tennessee and I've been spelunking the Stage32 site for a few months now. I am impressed by the caliber of professionals, proliferation of advice, and general awesomeness of all those I've had the pleasure of networking with. I'll likely be on h...
Expand postHello Stage32-ians! My name is Aaron Miller, I live in Tennessee and I've been spelunking the Stage32 site for a few months now. I am impressed by the caliber of professionals, proliferation of advice, and general awesomeness of all those I've had the pleasure of networking with. I'll likely be on here quite a bit going into the fall semester as I'll be teaching a "media production" class. One of the most difficult elements I've struggled to find resources for are actual camera angles--by that I mean real footage that I can share with students. Any advice as to where I might find some teacher resources would be greatly appreciated. I don't any projects for which I'm seeking professionals, but like many of you I have a lot of irons in the fire. Working on a stage play, finally published a novella last year, putting together some fun stuff with video. I am just hoping to expand my network of awesome people to seek advice, and maybe possibly hopefully bring in as guest speakers for my students. Best to you all, Aaron
What's amazing I've found looking through the Lounges, especially in Screenwriting Lounge, is that almost NO ONE has a question about CRAFT. It's all about selling, how to get an agent, how to get funding and financing, how to get distribution, contests to enter, online pitchfests, how to get discov...
Expand postWhat's amazing I've found looking through the Lounges, especially in Screenwriting Lounge, is that almost NO ONE has a question about CRAFT. It's all about selling, how to get an agent, how to get funding and financing, how to get distribution, contests to enter, online pitchfests, how to get discovered, and of course pitches of your projects, Loglines and videos trying to get noticed. Yet not ONE thread seems to be about getting BETTER at screenwriting. Maybe this is why only 2% of projects are worth recommending...
Thank you. :)
Hi again, Michelle, my Stage 32 Next Level Class might be helpful to you. https://www.stage32.com/classes/How-To-Hook-Your-Reader-In-Only-5-Pages We discuss the typical paradigms of script openings. I...
Expand commentHi again, Michelle, my Stage 32 Next Level Class might be helpful to you. https://www.stage32.com/classes/How-To-Hook-Your-Reader-In-Only-5-Pages We discuss the typical paradigms of script openings. I can also give you a private class, should you want one-on-one attention. Please feel free to ask S32 Moderator Beth Fox Heisinger for an honest critique of the class. In any case, let me stress again - there is no "standard" format in TV. Like Cherie said, some shows utilize a Teaser; others do not.
Just started a screenplay. And working on a rough PowerPoint presentation as a teaser trailer . making up the visuals that I can use and giving a tagline. This so far is helping me as I develope the story.
Greetings, I want to first thank you for connecting with me. To find out all there is to know about me, I invite you to go to my company, Maxima Vision Film’s site at www.maximavisionsproductions.com. I look forward to developing a profitable relationship with you in the future....
Expand postGreetings, I want to first thank you for connecting with me. To find out all there is to know about me, I invite you to go to my company, Maxima Vision Film’s site at www.maximavisionsproductions.com. I look forward to developing a profitable relationship with you in the future.
Stage32'ers, anyone know of people buying script ideas? I'm a full-time theatre teacher, barely enough time to write let alone write a screen/stage play. I'd like to sell my unfinished ideas, have someone turn them into a treatment, spec script, even generate some loglines if possible. I realize tha...
Expand postStage32'ers, anyone know of people buying script ideas? I'm a full-time theatre teacher, barely enough time to write let alone write a screen/stage play. I'd like to sell my unfinished ideas, have someone turn them into a treatment, spec script, even generate some loglines if possible. I realize that you'd have to see the ideas (or at least a sampling) in order to even consider such an offer. But, it seems to me that a fresh idea that isn't a reboot from an '80s flick, a contrived sequel or prequel, or an outlandish mashup might well be worth the risk or small investment. What are you thoughts, input and insight?
We are a group of indie filmmakers in NE Alabama. Check us out at: http://www.blackcreekproductions.com/ Our associate company, http://www.byfytv.com/, is also looking for original content movies and web series for upload. Come make movies with us....
Expand postWe are a group of indie filmmakers in NE Alabama. Check us out at: http://www.blackcreekproductions.com/ Our associate company, http://www.byfytv.com/, is also looking for original content movies and web series for upload. Come make movies with us.
Thanks for connecting Aaron.
Been working on writing some screen plays and have two in 2nd draft status. I go over them and try and see if I made any mistakes but sometimes I feel like sometimes my dialogue might be the problem. I posted my scripts to Amazon Studios but you don't get much feedback there from the site or people...
Expand postBeen working on writing some screen plays and have two in 2nd draft status. I go over them and try and see if I made any mistakes but sometimes I feel like sometimes my dialogue might be the problem. I posted my scripts to Amazon Studios but you don't get much feedback there from the site or people on the site. So figured I would try to see what tips anyone has for writing dialogue.
I'm always aware of that quote from a Hollywood director who referred to a screenplay as "120 pages of suggestions"!
Yes - once you hand it over to the director, it's not yours any more! \O/ It's a framework, basically. :D
Great quote, Tom, which director made, it?
What are some great ways to add conflict to scenes? Any rules of thumb?
Great advise! thanks all.
"The Women" is nothing BUT conflict. Have you watched it recently? I think nothing beats really sharp, deadly wit, because the other characters all react in different ways.
The 1939 version.
Gurus of the film making world I am in need of a sherpa who might guide me to and through the purchase of a film making "kit". I am planning on teaching film & video next year and would like to start saving & investing in the equipment necessary to shoot short films (these are high school students,...
Expand postGurus of the film making world I am in need of a sherpa who might guide me to and through the purchase of a film making "kit". I am planning on teaching film & video next year and would like to start saving & investing in the equipment necessary to shoot short films (these are high school students, on a high school budget). I know lighting is essential, already have stands & lamps & bulbs -- although a few more wouldn't hurt -- but I'd like to get an idea of what camera would best suit my circumstances. I'm a writer, makeup artist, acting coach, and I've done directing & production so those aren't where I currently need guidance (not say that won't change in the near future). What I do need some help with is the camera situation. I've come across the Canon Vixia HV30 and the Nikon D90, but I'm not certain either is a viable option. Your suggestions & wisdom would be greatly appreciated.
Grab some of those great dimmable LED batteriy powered lights that come with filters on amazon for less than forty bucks. Made in China. Amazing deal, and they're big. Get a camera that has the most o...
Expand commentGrab some of those great dimmable LED batteriy powered lights that come with filters on amazon for less than forty bucks. Made in China. Amazing deal, and they're big. Get a camera that has the most on line user experience...(advice, technical, etc.) Or are you budgeted for a few cameras? Don't forget to have drop in pros visit the class...I bet your local big camera store would love to showcase their gear with your students, perhaps on a remote. And don't let that tech zoid student dominate your class....
Hi Aaron Hi, thanks for connecting here on 32,Look forward to hearing of your work & projects. I'm trying to build an E: Fan Base. Here's some links if you'd like to join me on twitter, visit my site or just listen to some of my music: http://www.twitter.com/maxmusiccouk http://www.reverbnation.com/...
Expand postHi Aaron Hi, thanks for connecting here on 32,Look forward to hearing of your work & projects. I'm trying to build an E: Fan Base. Here's some links if you'd like to join me on twitter, visit my site or just listen to some of my music: http://www.twitter.com/maxmusiccouk http://www.reverbnation.com/maxmusic http://www.max-music.co.uk Cheers MAX
This is the year of bringing experts to work with my students and perform their fabulous shows! So excited to be working with comedian Robert Post! Working on bringing the wonderful Elaine Bromka and her Tea for Three show! Anybody else interested in working with some eager theater students in a community that passionately supports the arts?
If anyone needs ideas, I have them. Screenplays, TV shows, stage work--or if you need someone to be creative conduit for your existing ideas, I'm kinda good at that sort of thing. I have a background in radio, marketing & advertising, teaching, writing, Sfx Makeup, web design--lots of creative stuff.
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