JC Young: Screenwriter, voice artist and actor in Cincinnati, Ohio.

Adrian-Asia Petty
Screen Writing exercise

Describe in one line the internal dialog of the guy in the blue shirt.

Thomas Lee Howell

Stay away from my sister.

E Langley

Get the hint. You've been on your knees for three years. The answer is "NO!"

James L. Lytle III

There's always some dude, fcking it up for us real guy's!

Kira Maves

Hi JC, you have an interesting bio and I would like to know you more if you do not mind. I would like to meet you in person some day for more knowledge my email is kiramaves@gmail.com I am hoping to hear from you soon ?...

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Doug Fetterly
Are viewers tired of political TV series?

I wrote a one-hour tv pilot about an African American female journalist in DC who takes on corruption (including Big Pharma, a senator, FDA Commissioner, and a few others). One critic told me that viewers have grown tired of political drama. Thoughts?

Timothy Liebe

Well, here's my resume (audio reel link at the bottom)—https://drdarkeny.blogspot.com/2022/07/timothy-e-liebe-resume-072022.htm .

I'm going down to New York City today (family emergency), so while I'm there I'll see if a few of the people I used to work with still do voice acting.

Stan Evans

If pushing an agenda and promoting an identity is your main concern, you'll lose the audience. They want to be entertained, not indoctrinated. Sadly, Hollywood doesn't get that. No reason to make the other side feel bad. As Michael Jordan once said, "conservatives buy sneakers too"

Timothy Liebe

Gee, Stan Eans—does that mean I should throw out my Tom Clancy and W.E.B. Griffin novels, and stop watching Dick Wolf shows, because they could be said to be "pushing an agenda"?

Having a point of view...

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JC Young
Pitch Review AI Written?

Just got a recent feedback on a script pitch and I feel like it was written by an intern or a ChatAP..

Think I'm done paying for pitches for a while.

Niki H

Hi JC, will you write in to writerhelp@stage32.com so we can look into this? I absolutely want to make sure you feel good about the services you’re getting. Let them know Niki said to write in.

JC Young
Written Pitches on Stage32

I've recently purchased several written pitches and tried to follow Stage 32's recommended guidelines regarding content etc. I'm using .pdf format, I'm limiting certain subjects etc and strictly limiting the pitch to 2 easy to read pages. Mostly I've gotten pretty good feedback, some great responses...

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Terri Morgan

I'd say if you've gotten read requests, you surely must be doing something right! I've just been working on my written pitch. The first time, I struggled get it onto two pages. It just wasn't going to...

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Emily J

Hey @JC! Great question, I agree with Terri that if you've gotten read requests then I wouldn't overhaul your pitch. But maybe try it out with some small adjustments and more details in some areas and...

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Niki H

I agree with Emily! Perhaps try a verbal pitch now, you may be able to more organically add-in extra information. Sometimes it's also helpful to ask yourself "why". Why is the person asking for additional information? What's the underlying reason?

Tim Bragg
Greenlight My Movie

Has anyone ever pitched on greenlightmymovie.com?

Tim Bragg

Than they are legit, do you know if they have had success optioning scripts to studios?

JC Young

Misread that as Gaslight My Movie.

Richard "RB" Botto

We work with over 2,000 execs here, Tim. Never heard one bring them up. And as a writer/producer myself, they've never come up in any negotiation or other discussion. Not much more I can offer there beyond that.

Eisha Marjara
Finding a literary agent

Is it a faux pas to send query letters to multiple literary agencies if one is searching for an agent?

Allison Bruning

I'm looking for one for my screenplays. I own a publishing house so I don't need one for my novels.

JC Young

If you waited the 2-8 weeks some take to get back to you, then you would be shopping the same script around for the rest of your life.

Cynthia Garbutt

Never put ALL your eggs in one basket.

Tony Byrd
Doing an anthology TV show

I'm thinking about doing an sci-fi anthology TV block. It's called Nightmare Festival. It's my idea that stuck in my mind. What should I do?

Mel Nieves

It's a choice. There are no set rules except to make the themes compelling and thought provoking.

Tony Byrd

The Wonderful World of Disney

Mel Nieves

Well there have been, but the most famous and ground breaking of those was Playhouse 90 from the early days of television which helped introduce the writings of Rod Serling, Paddy Chayefsky, Horton Foote, Frank Gilroy to a larger audience.

JC Young

I am minimizing myself on the Twitter dumpster fire. First, by removing my Twitter account from all my writing profiles. Second, I created a Mastadon account - https://screenwriting.space/@writerjcyoung

JC Young
Two new requests for Boost

Boost, my feature screenplay homage to the car chase / caper flicks of the 1970's has received two requests recently. Fingers crossed.

James Welday

Best of luck!

Maurice Vaughan

Great title, JC Young. Congratulations on the requests!

Shellie Schmals

Wow, that's awesome! Congrats!

JC Young

Jaime Perez-Cadena
Meet Up Group in Chicago

Let's start a Stage 32 in Chicago. Interested parties please contact me.

Cassie Hicks

Say, Jaime, hate to be kind of off-topic, but while I may not be interested in joining a Stage 32 group, I have a question to ask you.: Do you know any local publicists? B/c I have three topics that a...

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Cassie Hicks

BTW, I think I've changed my mind-what time is the Stage 32 Meetup Group? I hope that it's in the morning.

Cassie Hicks

Jaime, are you sure that your correct e-mail address is jim@shrughouse.com? B/c when I've tried to e-mail to you, I've gotten a failure notice.:( What is your correct e-mail address? :/

Martin Reese
Turning Your TV Pilot Into Comic/Graphic Novel

I have toyed with the idea of turning my TV Pilot into a graphic novel/comic to help generate more interest. I have seen some articles that say it's a good idea and some that say it's not. I'd like to get the opinion of others that may have ventured into this arena.

Niki H

Us comic lovers are fickle but always hungry for good stories and art. I really like Shellie's and Debbie's ideas. They are a much lower-cost way of organically building an audience and testing intere...

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Shellie Schmals

Martin Reese - here's a good article that breaks it down. >> https://www.nerdwallet.com/article/small-business/indiegogo-vs-kickstarter - unless things have changed, you can't redeem your donations fr...

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JC Young
Boost - Feature Action Screenplay Pitch Deck

Created a mini-pitch deck for my 70's Car Chase/Caper Homage #Boost.

Hosted on Inktip:

#Screenwriting #PreWGA #ActionFeature #Agent #Manager #PitchDeck...

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JC Young
Script Request

Received the nod to send Scarlet Seas to a producer a few days ago. Fingers crossed, gang.

Maurice Vaughan

Congrats, JC Young! That's great! Hope it leads to a sell and production!

JC's network

Kira Maves
Alessandro de Marco
James Papa
Matthew Parvin
Marcos Fizzotti
Martin Reese
Katherine Arifin
Toy High
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