I've recently released a new book that I converted from one of my screenplays. The screenplay would be very expensive to produce, so I decided to convert it to a book.
If you like fast-paced comedy with some heart included, this might be for you.
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Hey Matthew, how's everything in Bedford? Thanks for the connection.
Hi Matthew, thanks for reaching out and connecting! It's a pleasure to meet another Screenwriter on Stage 32. Have a great rest of the week! Donna
Welcome, Donna. Hope all is well with you.
A returning navy veteran has trouble finding work and eventually rises to kingpin status by selling meth.
Hello. My opinion - adjectives don't help a log line. "dangerous" - that could be many different things and we all know that selling drugs could be "dangerous." Can you put a more exciting, definitive word there? Same for "honest." What does that mean? I hate log lines. I produce them cause no one reads anymore.
Thanks for the feedback Dawn. That was a logline I got back from coverage. I've reworded the logline myself. Thoughts?
On their anniversary all Jake wants is to give his wife Sandy the most romantic day ever. However, when he can suddenly see her happiness meter, pleasing her... This is a short film I co-wrote. Directed by Jenn Page.
Hot off the press! Here's a 30-second spot I wrote which my buddy Jason Epperson directed.
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A "critter-control specialist" must learn the value of life itself when he accidentally blows himself up and is reincarnated as a series of animals.
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