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GOD MODE
By Arthur Charpentier
SYNOPSIS:
God Mode is a term from PC games where the player gains an overwhelming advantage over enemies. However, in this story, it is the antagonist who has such opportunities relative to the hero.
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Nice idea and title!
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But the budget is too spicy :))
Roxana Anghel, thank you for the high rating!
Roxana Anghel, Why do you think that the film will require a large budget? The hero moves to the past for one year, the action is in our days. This is a typical action movie with elements of fiction.
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Todd Garrison, thank you for the high rating!
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I'd like to read the screenplay. This is a Fascinating Premise!!
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William Gunn, Thank you very much for your high rating and feedback! Unfortunately, in Russia it is impossible to sell the script of a fantastic action movie, so I did not waste time writing it. But your words have given me motivation to get to work and see if this idea will turn out to be a really good story.
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Nice logline, Arthur! Can it be shortened a bit? "Unjustly sentenced to death for murder a (his profession?) struggles to re-live the past and find the real assassin." You get the protagonist, a problem, and an antagonist. Would it be better to introduce complications in the summary? Just an idea.
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Robin Gregory, thank you very much for your high rating and suggestion for improving the logline!
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It's super interesting but could be a little more concise. A man sentenced to death is sent back in time under police surveillance. Determined to find the killer he faces one major problem; he remember nothing of the future. Sorry, don't mean to rewrite it. Just showing how it could fit into a smaller space. Would love to read it!
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Kathryn Zizek
Thank you so much for your assessment and comment. You are right and I am still searching for the perfect formulation of this logline.
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A new version of the logline.
as a result of an experiment to correct the past, the victim of a setup gets a chance to find the real killer. The problem is that the killer knows the future, which happened in many time loops before that.
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