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THE END OF HEARTACHE
By Marty Chartrand
A widowed father turns to bare-knuckle fighting in hopes to ease the pain of losing his wife.
THE END OF HEARTACHE
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Very nicely done! A beautiful and honest effort on a very real and delicate scenario.
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What's the story?
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Great Story...Lots of Pathos without being too heavy-handed. Believable protagonist. You can almost feel his pain!
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Good screenplay, maybe cut the last line. For the logline, maybe something like this but better: "A widowed father turns to bare-knuckle fighting, hoping to ease the pain of losing his wife. Fast becoming his own worst enemy, he must look for psychological help or lose his young daughter too."
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OMG was getting caught up in the story, very emotional.
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This is a nice story
I see someone like a Steve Austin, in the starring role
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Great Title too
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Love the story, it has great appeal!
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I'm intrigued
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