The concept sounds exciting, but I think the logline needs some work. I think the goal of the story needs to be stated ("stop the villain gang" or whatever the goal is). How about: "After two simple-minded friends lose their jobs in a cookie factory, they unwittingly become costumed crusaders and try to stop an evil gang of super villains that's holding their town ransom."

Also, is it a town or a city? A city would be better cinematically.

Thanks Maurice - good points! Much appreciated!

You're welcome, Len Varley.