If it’s a daydream within the context of the scene you can break the “real” scene with the heading “DAYDREAM”, write the dream and end with “END DAYDREAM” to return to the scene. There are a couple of ways this can be done but the main thing is to make what you intend clear to the reader.
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NICHOLAS' DAYDREAM (VISION, HALLUCINATION, etc)
Blah.
BACK
Glimpse.
QUICK FLASH (MEMORY FLASH) - DESCRIPTOR
Whatever it is.
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Thank you E Langley
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Da nada. Welcome.
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Agree with E Langley - that's a great structure that will take the reader there.
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Exactly what I want to do Sam Sokolow
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If it’s a daydream within the context of the scene you can break the “real” scene with the heading “DAYDREAM”, write the dream and end with “END DAYDREAM” to return to the scene. There are a couple of ways this can be done but the main thing is to make what you intend clear to the reader.
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Yeah I am getting to it soon Ewan Dunbar
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ECHO Echo echo... :)
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BEGIN FANTASY
END FANTASY
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It is a daydream Bill Brock E Langley Ewan Dunbar Sam Sokolow
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Nicholas P No worries. I refer to my characters' daydreams as fantasies.
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Other than the "Da Nada" part, E Langley is spot on. (It's actually "De nada". LOL)
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Aqui se habla who cares. :) LOL