Anything Goes

I am trying an idea that might be more inviting when reading my script, tell me what you think, does this make you want to read more of the story.

INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT

Twenty-four-year-old THOMAS KENNEDY, a conventionally handsome Caucasian man, possesses the unwavering dedication of a provider and...

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I am trying an idea that might be more inviting when reading my script, tell me what you think, does this make you want to read more of the story.

INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT

Twenty-four-year-old THOMAS KENNEDY, a conventionally handsome Caucasian man, possesses the unwavering dedication of a provider and the steadfast loyalty of a family man. His all-American features – a youthful face framed by a rugged appeal – belie the strength of his character. Even amidst the relentless rhythm of the paper products factory, where he diligently stacks and prepares shipments, his inherent dignity shines through. He's a picture of quiet resilience, his work ethic a testament to his values. The worn denim and simple tee shirt he wears only highlight his unwavering commitment to his responsibilities.

INT. WAREHOUSE BREAK ROOM - NIGHT

Seated solitary at a secluded table, Thomas consumed his meal in contemplative silence.

INT. WAREHOUSE DOCK - NIGHT

Employing a motorized lift, Thomas skillfully maneuvers a heavy pallet from the delivery truck, its weighty cargo carefully secured.

INT. KENNEDY'S BATHROOM - NIGHT

A fractured reflection stares back from the vanity's shattered glass, its jagged edges mirroring the disarray below. A chaotic sprawl of prescription containers litters the countertop, a testament to a troubled mind.

Twenty-three-year-old ASHLEY KENNEDY, a white cisgender woman, possessed a volatile spirit, her moods shifting like desert sands, making her a difficult companion. Haunted by insecurity, she perpetually felt like an outsider, a solitary figure adrift in a sea of faces. Her hand, trembling slightly, closed around a vial. With a decisive twist, the cap yielded, releasing its contents. A cascade of pills, a bitter harvest, tumbled into her palm. Her eyelids fluttered shut, a final, desperate act of surrender to the shadows within.

Georgia is becoming a popular place for making films, thanks to its beautiful scenery, unique culture, and helpful support for filmmakers. Here are the main reasons why Georgia is a great choice:

In Georgia, you can find many kinds of landscapes in one small country....

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Georgia is becoming a popular place for making films, thanks to its beautiful scenery, unique culture, and helpful support for filmmakers. Here are the main reasons why Georgia is a great choice:

1. Different Types of Locations

In Georgia, you can find many kinds of landscapes in one small country. There are mountains, valleys, beaches, deserts, and forests. Cities like Tbilisi also have both old and modern buildings, giving filmmakers lots of options.

2. Unique Architecture

Places like Tbilisi, Mtskheta, and Sighnaghi have special buildings that mix history with modern style. This makes it easy to create interesting and colorful scenes.

3. Affordable Costs

Filming in Georgia costs less than in many other countries. Renting locations, staying in hotels, and hiring local services are all budget-friendly.

4. Easy to Travel Around

Georgia has good roads and airports, so moving between locations is fast and simple.

5. Good Weather

With more than 300 sunny days a year, Georgia is perfect for filming outdoors without worrying about bad weather.

6. Government Support

The Georgian government has a program called “Film in Georgia” that helps filmmakers by giving tax discounts and financial support.

7. Rich Culture

Georgia has a strong cultural identity, from traditional music and dance to delicious food. These details can add something special to any project.

8. No Visa Problems

People from many countries can come to Georgia without a visa, making it easier to bring international film crews.

Georgia offers a mix of stunning nature, unique cityscapes, and helpful support for filmmakers. It’s a great place to create movies, series, music videos, and more.

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Maurice Vaughan

3 months ago

Congratulations on the request, Peter Bartels! I suggest emailing writerhelp@stage32.com.

Peter Bartels

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- Maurice Vaughan
3 months ago

Thank you for the help Maurice Vaughan as I was having trouble locating who to email.

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- Peter Bartels
3 months ago

You're welcome, Peter Bartels.

Suzanne Bronson

Pardon my lack of response Peter Bartels I have been out of commission with the flu. Thank you Maurice for helping out. Happy New Year!

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- Suzanne Bronson
3 months ago

You're welcome, Suzanne Bronson. Hope you feel better soon! Happy New Year!

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- Tom Schaefer
3 months ago

This is great, Tom Schaefer! I'm thinking about making mood reels for my spec scripts. Clip. Cafe will come in handy. Thanks! Happy New Year!

Tom Schaefer

I just tried to find a clip from "The Deep" but they didn't have it ... Robert Shaw and his "cold embrace of the sea" ...

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- Philip David Lee
3 months ago

What up, Philip David Lee? Here's the Top 10 movies I watched this year.

Smile 2

Alien: Romulus

Godzilla Minus One

The Substance

The Shadow Strays

Outside

Werewolves

Transformers One

Deadpool & Wolverin...

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Philip David Lee

Now to me, this is a nice honest list. I hate "slow burn" movies and really if I wanted to watch a drama, I'd just film a family reunion. I want to watch stuff that I don't have to worry about it killing me in real life.

Outside is a slow burn Zombie movie, Philip David Lee, but it has action scenes and suspenseful scenes in between the slow burn scenes. What really stands out are the characters, their broken relation...

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- Banafsheh Esmailzadeh
3 months ago

Happy belated Christmas, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh! I push through the doubt and write or take break and go back to writing later. And the doubt usually goes away when I write something great. Talking to...

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

Thanks Maurice Vaughan and that’s pretty much what I do, too. If I’m really stuck I write it all out in my journal and that usually helps me to remember why I’m doing this instead of some other thing....

You're welcome, Banafsheh Esmailzadeh. I like the journal idea. I might do that. Either a virtual journal or a paper journal.

Maurice Vaughan yeah journals are great to have, and you can of course get really nice paper journals.

Mike Boas

This is the kind of writing I push back against. Way too many words describing things we cannot see. Tell us who your character is in one or two short sentences and move on. The audience should get th...

Tim Bragg

Happy holidays Maurice. Mike that is my concern changing it around like this that it is wordy.

Arthur Charpentier

Doesn't it surprise you that directors prefer to film books? A literary script allows you to give the director more information to create a scene. However, some or many use a literary script Expand comment

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- Maurice Vaughan
3 months ago

Arthur. I spent this week reworking my script Boy Blue with a literary approach and also added scenes. the language, sex, alcohol and drug use have been removed along with the fighting scenes. the sto...

I am glad that you were able to find a suitable method of work for yourself. Getting pleasure from creativity is the most important thing.

Lindbergh E Hollingsworth

Hi Kevin, you're going to need to tackle this one with some research. Head over to IMDB.com and research who has worked with Disney a number of times. Your focus should be on producers and directors....

Kevin Hager

One idea is a Once Upon a Time in Disney, a couple meets Mickey Mouse, and together they have to save Disney and meet a young Walt Disney, and a crossover between American Dragon: Jake Long and the Hi...

I like your artwork, Rich Terdoslavich. I'm looking forward to seeing the new Nosferatu, Wolf Man, Frankenstein, Bride of Frankenstein, and Creature from the Black Lagoon movies....

Rich Terdoslavich

Thanks, Maurice. Sounds great! Have yet to see Invisible Man with Claude Rains in the starring role.

You're welcome, Rich Terdoslavich. I still need to see Invisible Man. I might do an Invisible Man double feature. The 1933 movie and the 2020 movie.

Hi, Diana Saralidze. Welcome to the community. Georgia does sound like a great place for filmmakers! I'm thinking about writing a script that takes place in Georgia and pitching it to producers and di...