Screenwriting : I will outline your suggestion by Craig D Griffiths

Craig D Griffiths

I will outline your suggestion

Hi everyone,

If you make a suggestion I will outline it in a video on my youtube channel.

If I get more than one, I choose one, or you guys can suggest the best one.

Don’t give too much detail, just a basic idea.

You agree to:

Being named and thanked on the video.

You will not own the output. It will be in the public domain.

That is it an educational exercise to show how an outline can be developed.

Thanks to everyone.

Craig D Griffiths

Just a prompt. The reason I am asking you good folks to so show an idea can be worked up into something. I don’t want the video to look like I am just showing work I have had in a desk draw for years. Thanks again.

Arthur Charpentier

I don't quite understand what needs to be done. are you ready to accept an idea in any genre? I am ready to offer my logline, which I could not expand into a synopsis.

LOGLINE:

A young model signs a contract with the NecroStar modeling agency, where zombie models work. However, not everyone likes the presence of a live girl. Someone is trying to kill the heroine and she will have to learn all the laws of the modeling business from her own experience and not die before the end of the contract, otherwise she will have to work after death for an eternity.

Craig D Griffiths

Thanks Arthur, yea any idea any genre. But even a logline is too much detail. You have some obstacles and an outcome in mind. But I will take this and run with it. Thanks again.

Something like “A zombie modelling agency takes on a living girl as a client”. Something tat basic will do.

Victor Titimas

The story of a robot slayer, an enhanced human that takes down androids gone rogue.

Craig D Griffiths

outstanding Victor. Thank you.

I will be recording this week.

I’ll mention everyone

Arthur Charpentier

Craig D Griffiths, Good. I am interested to know your version of the plot. Thank you very much.

Rutger Oosterhoff

Just read the papers and that gave me an idea. What if...

FACE OF RESISTANCE

Iran. Theran, May, 2023. An other huge demonstration against the regime. A young woman not wearing a headscarf gets shot in the back by an fanatical Iran 'morality' policeman. He turns her body around to see he just shot his precious daughter, the kid he always thought was a law abiding citizen.

She dies in his arms -- leading to his extistential crisis that triggers him to slowly become an international well known FACE of RISISTANCE; on DEATH ROW, the goverment POSTPONES his execution again and again, afraid of publicly losing face if the regime's former posterboy becomes a martyr.

Philo Kvetch

A mentally unsound man proclaims himself king then travels the land fooling people by telling half-truths and spinning fantasies then rewards them with absurd advice.

Craig D Griffiths

Philo thanks.

Craig D Griffiths

Samar that is interesting

Craig D Griffiths

I am recording in about 20 hours. Thanks everyone.

Craig D Griffiths

Thanks everyone. I’ll share the episode

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