Screenwriting : Gaia Effect Logline by Rodrigo Portela

Rodrigo Portela

Gaia Effect Logline

Hi everybody, how are you? I'd love to hear from you about the logline of my feature film project GAIA EFFECT! Thank you all! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- GAIA, the Earth's consciousness, is rapidly changing and wants to force humans to take notice. In this world, some few people "forget who they are" and become PREDATORS or PRAY and stay in PRIMAL STATE. Two brothers must team up to get out of town and survive the GAIA EFFECT.

Craig D Griffiths

What is Gaia? A person, a place or a religious.

“When people start devolving into primeval predators, two brothers are forced to fight their way out of town”.

Kiril Maksimoski

Although I assume ure using "Gaia" as a hook, we still need to know what that is, as Craig asked. This way I feel unattached to the logline...

Rodrigo Portela

Gaia is the "Earth consciousness", thank you for your answers!

Barbara Dvoran

It sounds very interesting, in my opinion! I would be curious to know more about the psychological effects to the people.

Molly Peck

Hi Rodrigo, don't forget to post this on your Stage 32 profile as well to receive more feedback and ratings!

Oleh Holyzov

Interesting, reminiscent of the almost eponymous 2021 movie called "Gaia" which also utilizes James Lovelock's Gaia hypothesis as the basis for its plot. I agree that it's difficult to pick up on what it even is unless you know in advance. I think adding a more detailed synopsis, however, could help avoid this.

Dan "Alias" Delfosse

Where's the Log line?

Sam Mannetti

Hi Rodrigo, have you done a stage 32 logline review yet? It's a great resource to help you craft a stellar logline. https://www.stage32.com/scriptservices/coverage/buy?id=22

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