Mhamad Shamas Aldain Aljajah: Author in Moers, Deutschland.

Göran Johansson
Correct grammar, or shortest

Obviously it is preferable to use correct grammar when writing screenplays. But production companies also want screenplays to be as short as possible.

Here comes multiple alternatives for the same scene :

Pauline enters. Walks into the archive. Returns with an unused practice target. Exits. GUNSHOT....

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E Langley

When are we going to eat grandma?

When are we going to eat, grandma?

Sure, punctuation like Direct Address commas are unnecessary. While we're at it, leave all commas and periods out of a script then se...

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Vincent Turner

Pauline enters. She walks into the archive. She returns with an unused practice target. She exits. GUNSHOT.

I would deal with page count, & would drop 'enters'... lol

Pauline walks into the archive.

She...

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Göran Johansson

Dear friends, I apologize for creating a misunderstandment. Below comes the whole scene.

About the details. I use this location in 6 different scenes. So those details which are of no importance in th...

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Richard "RB" Botto

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