I’m a forever student of Story and am looking for recommendations for screenplays I should read? What are your favorites? Thanks!
I’m a forever student of Story and am looking for recommendations for screenplays I should read? What are your favorites? Thanks!
I'm new here and just wondering if there are any other Save the Cat followers here. I have read Save the Cat, Save the Cat Strikes Back, and Save the Cat goes to the Movies. I love the structure ideas that Blake presents with the Beat Sheet and his expansion upon that Beat Sheet. It has helped me im...
Expand postI'm new here and just wondering if there are any other Save the Cat followers here. I have read Save the Cat, Save the Cat Strikes Back, and Save the Cat goes to the Movies. I love the structure ideas that Blake presents with the Beat Sheet and his expansion upon that Beat Sheet. It has helped me immensely in structuring my screenplays although I don't follow the "must happen on this exact page" philosophy.
I absolutely loved this book. In fact, I was going to announce that Amazon.com just published my review. Link is http://www.amazon.com/review/R2G1PFH3MH641N....
Expand commentI absolutely loved this book. In fact, I was going to announce that Amazon.com just published my review. Link is http://www.amazon.com/review/R2G1PFH3MH641N.
I also enjoyed it. Review is here: http://www.amazon.com/review/R1EPZ601VDLNF7/ref=cm_cr_pr_perm?ie=UTF8&AS... I think it's important to remember, though, that there needs to be a compelling story to...
Expand commentI also enjoyed it. Review is here: http://www.amazon.com/review/R1EPZ601VDLNF7/ref=cm_cr_pr_perm?ie=UTF8&AS... I think it's important to remember, though, that there needs to be a compelling story to hang on that framework, or you'll just end up with 100 pages of well structure tripe.
Blake Snyder has absolutely helped me. I also love Frank Daniel's 8-Sequence System. He taught it at USC and AFI. His and Blake's guides are the most popular structures at www.scriptoutliner.com
The screenplay I'm writing right now has three characters mistook for an African hitman and his entourage. Each has a ridiculous accent when they are pretending to be that character. So do I put a parenthetical before each dialogue to denote that this line is meant to be the "character's accent" lik...
Expand postThe screenplay I'm writing right now has three characters mistook for an African hitman and his entourage. Each has a ridiculous accent when they are pretending to be that character. So do I put a parenthetical before each dialogue to denote that this line is meant to be the "character's accent" like (African Accent), or is there an easier way like adding the fake character name as a separate character? Or is that even easier?
I just have a lot of back and forth between their accents so I want to make sure I make it the least confusing. Thanks for any suggestions!
David Tackett, I would add a note during the character introductions saying that they talk in fake accents sometimes, then use parentheticals when they use the fake accents. I would also bold the note...
Expand commentDavid Tackett, I would add a note during the character introductions saying that they talk in fake accents sometimes, then use parentheticals when they use the fake accents. I would also bold the note during the character introductions. It would be a combination of what Ivo Raza, Dustin Quinteros, and CJ Walley said.
I wouldn't do separate character names. That's definitely confusing. Depending on the length of the dialogue, you can put it in italics in the action section just before they start talking with the ac...
Expand commentI wouldn't do separate character names. That's definitely confusing. Depending on the length of the dialogue, you can put it in italics in the action section just before they start talking with the accents. So, something like, "Ed, Bill, and Greg approach the guard, each one using their fake African accents." At whatever point they stop the accents, just put that in the action section. If it only happens in a couple of lines here and there, put in a parenthetical below the character's name in the dialogue. Just put (AFRICAN ACCENT) in all caps like that.
Good luck, David!
if you keep the character names the same it will make it easier for actors, production departments and readers. As mentioned abobe, you can include a note in brackets to make it clear to the reader an...
Expand commentif you keep the character names the same it will make it easier for actors, production departments and readers. As mentioned abobe, you can include a note in brackets to make it clear to the reader and actors that they are delivering the line in their alter-ego. You can have some fun with this too, like if the accent is unconvincing you can mention it.
My wife and I run a taping service in Atlanta (Get Taped!), and we're also actors. We've been taping auditions for others going on 15 years, and so we've seen it all. Something that came up recently (but is not new) is when an actor hasn't taken a basic script analysis class, and makes the following...
Expand postMy wife and I run a taping service in Atlanta (Get Taped!), and we're also actors. We've been taping auditions for others going on 15 years, and so we've seen it all. Something that came up recently (but is not new) is when an actor hasn't taken a basic script analysis class, and makes the following mistake: the stage directions say "a VOICE calls from outside" and then the character name is VOICE (O.S.). Then the very next stage direction says SAM enters. Then SAM says something. Many actors don't understand that VOICE IS SAM. It's a simple writing convention that until the character can be visually identified, they aren't listed as such. Sometimes this is extremely obvious, and other times it's a little harder to pick up on.
The moral of the story is training training training! Even though the "10,000 hours" philosophy has been somewhat debunked, it's still a great number to think of as the MINIMUM required for your training if you plan on sustaining a long career. I can speak for Atlanta that there are a large number of actors who tip toe into the industry, get an agent, but don't continue training. Predictably, they move on from the industry a couple years later. Every career requires continuing education. Don't let your acting career be any different!
Great question. I think it depends on what you’ve done so far. I think a great scene study class is essential to learn script analysis among other key fundamentals. Too many actors skip this step assu...
Expand commentGreat question. I think it depends on what you’ve done so far. I think a great scene study class is essential to learn script analysis among other key fundamentals. Too many actors skip this step assuming that auditioning IS their training. Big mistake. But once an actor has a good foundation, improv becomes essential to that “next level” because it takes that training you’ve had and makes it more versatile. Because you will NEVER get to act in optimal conditions. Improv teaches you to embrace that, adjust in the moment, and actually have fun creating something new that was never intended.
Agree, in film making there is so much juicey tid bits to learn my biggest problem is not enough hours in the day!
I think all those are great investments...not an actor but as a writer/director i took all kinds of classes, acting, improv, rehearsal,etc, and they all were incredible experiences. I was pushed to th...
Expand commentI think all those are great investments...not an actor but as a writer/director i took all kinds of classes, acting, improv, rehearsal,etc, and they all were incredible experiences. I was pushed to the improv class by a friend, and then loved it and studied/practiced as part of my writing... and then last year did a film where I had some serious improv talent on set and used all that to work with them...
Hey, fellow screenwriters! When you've completed one script and you're about to start writing a new one, how do you decide what to write next? Do you look at what might be the next hot thing for the market?
I write the movie I'd wanna see at the cinema
Donnalyn, I'm not really a follower of trends when it comes to me deciding what to write next. (And that's my tough luck!)
Me, I'm like Wally and Greg in that my next project is the one I'd want to go...
Expand commentDonnalyn, I'm not really a follower of trends when it comes to me deciding what to write next. (And that's my tough luck!)
Me, I'm like Wally and Greg in that my next project is the one I'd want to go see at a theater or watch on TV...a project I keep thinking about.
And it's got to be a project where I've already mapped out six plot points and got an outline/scene list ready.
Great question, Donnalyn! Thanks for posting...and all the VERY BEST to you!
I have a list of ideas/premises that are in the waiting...
Please join the (virtual) film premiere of my film REBOOT CAMP, featuring David Koechner, Ed Begley Jr. David Lipper, Ja Rule, Chaz Bono, Lindsey Shaw at the Austin Film Festival this month.
This year, the festival is virtual...don't have to be in Austin to participate. The screening is available wor...
Expand postPlease join the (virtual) film premiere of my film REBOOT CAMP, featuring David Koechner, Ed Begley Jr. David Lipper, Ja Rule, Chaz Bono, Lindsey Shaw at the Austin Film Festival this month.
This year, the festival is virtual...don't have to be in Austin to participate. The screening is available worldwide and starts with the premiere October 23 at 8:30PM EST (and is available for 6 days, until the end of the festival.)
Every person who buys a ticket is eligible to vote for for the Audience Award.
https://watch.eventive.org/austinfilmfestival2020/play/5f652faede8758008...
Thank you, Ivo
Hi, I'm a filmmaker (director, writer, editor), currently in post production on Reboot Camp, an ensemble comedy with David Lipper, David Koechner, Ed Begley, Chaz Bono, Lindsay Shaw, Eric Roberts, Ja Rule and many others. Hope everyone's enjoying a lovely weekend. https://www.rebootcampfilm.com...
Expand postHi, I'm a filmmaker (director, writer, editor), currently in post production on Reboot Camp, an ensemble comedy with David Lipper, David Koechner, Ed Begley, Chaz Bono, Lindsay Shaw, Eric Roberts, Ja Rule and many others. Hope everyone's enjoying a lovely weekend. https://www.rebootcampfilm.com
Eric Roberts - the man of 1,000 films. :)
what's your favorite heist film? mine is Le Circle Rouge.
https://www.theringer.com/movies/2018/11/19/18101871/best-heist-movies-s......
Expand postwhat's your favorite heist film? mine is Le Circle Rouge.
https://www.theringer.com/movies/2018/11/19/18101871/best-heist-movies-s...
Hey all, I’m new to the film scene and I was just wanting to pose the question. Is it possible to make an action or horror feature film on a dslr? And if yes, what steps would you take in doing that?
Of course you can. Many features are shot with DSLR cameras.
https://www.imdb.com/list/ls059550382/
The bigger questions are......what can you afford - from a camera standpoint, and from a lens standpo...
Expand commentOf course you can. Many features are shot with DSLR cameras.
https://www.imdb.com/list/ls059550382/
The bigger questions are......what can you afford - from a camera standpoint, and from a lens standpoint?
Getting the most bang for your buck and managing your project and time wisely are obviously important factors in your project. Hook up with a wise guru or two that can help you out....and who might have the equipment already, if you don't.....give them ownership in your project, bro, and make things as easy as possible for you. You're a really good filmmaker already, and have a great command of a director's POV, and keeping an audience engaged and your story moving. You also might want to check out this Stage32 webinar:
https://www.stage32.com/webinars/The-Camera-Conundrum-Choosing-the-Best-...
Watch the webinar...get your gurus....give them a piece of the pie if necessary, bro....and go make that voodoo that you do so welllllllll! Heh-heh.
Best wishes to you and your family, and best fortunes in your endeavors!
Yep. I would just rig it out with a cage to give it weight. Also a recorder would be good to give it a little more color depth for post. But these guys shot 8bit and got good results. Just expose and...
Expand commentYep. I would just rig it out with a cage to give it weight. Also a recorder would be good to give it a little more color depth for post. But these guys shot 8bit and got good results. Just expose and light properly. I DP'ed an indy feature with this camera as well. The A7III is cheaper and even better. The new Black Magic Pocket Cinema camera is impressive too. It's a tiny sensor but you can capture in raw.
Yes you can but it takes the same effort as if you were using a RED Camera with proper lighting and good glass. The movie Act of Valor was shot using a DSLR. About 80% of the movie was done using the...
Expand commentYes you can but it takes the same effort as if you were using a RED Camera with proper lighting and good glass. The movie Act of Valor was shot using a DSLR. About 80% of the movie was done using the Canon 5D. Search behind the scenes and how they did it. Here is the movie trailer https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_oFzxV_pmwI&t=31s
I want to get an agent. I have some screenplays that are ready for the screen. Any pointers? I'm reading through the listings in Writers Market 2018, and it the literary agents who will handle screenwriters are few and far between. Is there a BETTER LIST I could send queries to?
WOW Dan MaxXx really? How great! any more details?? Thank you!
Enter screenplays into legit competitions and if yours get to finalists, you should have an easier time reaching out to agents...
Hi Ivo, have won a number of Festival but I think one needs to attend the events to gain mileage. I live in Oz - a little difficult to attend all Festivals I've gained Finalist and/or won. I'm hoping...
Expand commentHi Ivo, have won a number of Festival but I think one needs to attend the events to gain mileage. I live in Oz - a little difficult to attend all Festivals I've gained Finalist and/or won. I'm hoping to make films out of some of my scripts this year. Sorry, this is not my blog and you may not have been directing to me at all. Sorry.
Keeping a short under 10 minutes is key. And while every story needs to be told in the time it requires, short film-makers need to be strategic about festival play. A 5 minute short...really easy to program...
Very good advice on the short film - good work. I learned something over my cup of coffee on Sunday - keep up the good work and break a leg on your short to come. dc
Not a bad suggestion, Ivo. Our last 2 short contest winners which led our Stage 32 Short Film Program had films over 10 minutes. But many in the program were under 10 as well.
Glad to hear it, Doug! If I can enhance your Sunday coffee experience, I've done my job.
Hi, my name is Ivo, short and 3 letters yet you wouldn't believe how many misspellings I get...Evo (classic), Yvo (exotic), Igloo (wtf) and my fave Evil. Like seriously some parent decided to name a kid Evil. OK, enough about that. I'm a filmmaker (screenwriter, director, editor) and currently in pr...
Expand postHi, my name is Ivo, short and 3 letters yet you wouldn't believe how many misspellings I get...Evo (classic), Yvo (exotic), Igloo (wtf) and my fave Evil. Like seriously some parent decided to name a kid Evil. OK, enough about that. I'm a filmmaker (screenwriter, director, editor) and currently in preproduction on y next film. The Reboot Camp. Cheers everyone
Much of the “How to become a screenwriter” info out there says that historical films are almost imposable to sell and get produced. However in the last few years there seems to be a lot of historical films being produced some of which have become Oscar nominees and winners. Just look at the last fou...
Expand postMuch of the “How to become a screenwriter” info out there says that historical films are almost imposable to sell and get produced. However in the last few years there seems to be a lot of historical films being produced some of which have become Oscar nominees and winners. Just look at the last four best pictures: “12 Years a Slave”, “Argo”, “The Artist” and “The Kings Speech” are all what I would consider historical films. Although some might argue Argo is not far enough back to be considered as such. So are historical scripts still a long shot at best or is the market for historical pictures growing? What do you think?
The Brits and a many others have a much longer theater history, so settings, costumes and props appropriate to historical tales are more ingrained in the culture. Take a look at Spielburgh's Amistad;...
Expand commentThe Brits and a many others have a much longer theater history, so settings, costumes and props appropriate to historical tales are more ingrained in the culture. Take a look at Spielburgh's Amistad; the costuming suffices but comes across to me as 'thin' and somewhat painted on. Though shot here, 12 Years A Slave seems to have a much better tuned look, not to mention a Brit Director.
Yes Ralph, 12 Years A Slave had excellent costuming, as did of course Lincoln, a movie I like very much. Generally I think the Brits have the edge in historical romances and dramas. With my 2 historical scripts, I'm entering Brit. competitions and am almost ready to pitch to producers there.
Like Biblical films, the historical genre appears to resurrect periodically with upgraded technology and new spin directors. Like Spielberg's Lincoln and Cameron's Titanic. However, historical edition...
Expand commentLike Biblical films, the historical genre appears to resurrect periodically with upgraded technology and new spin directors. Like Spielberg's Lincoln and Cameron's Titanic. However, historical editions of biblical stuff is harder to manage - mostly because belief is dna embedded and no one wants to let it be dented by historical details. This says the Jews of Judea were heroes in challenging Rome's emperors - else we'd all be worshiping Jupiter today. Five Roman historians of the 1st century agree: http://www.amazon.com/Ben-Hur-II-Happened-Century/dp/0994201842/ref=sr_1...
hey guys, check out an article I wrote for Script Mag. it's about alternative structure. feedback appreciated. http://www.scriptmag.com/features/must-your-hero-have-a-story-level-goal...
Expand posthey guys, check out an article I wrote for Script Mag. it's about alternative structure. feedback appreciated. http://www.scriptmag.com/features/must-your-hero-have-a-story-level-goal
Doesn't everybody, right? Well there is an alternative...check out this article I wrote for Screencraft on exposition... http://www.screencraft.org/blog/camels-strip-joints-and-david-mamet-or-h......
Expand postDoesn't everybody, right? Well there is an alternative...check out this article I wrote for Screencraft on exposition... http://www.screencraft.org/blog/camels-strip-joints-and-david-mamet-or-h...
I've read a lot of websites that paint a very negative picture about this. They strongly discourage anyone who would ever thinks about writing and sending screenplays. They say it's an impossible thing to do. And it's a very bad, offensive thing to wish to do. Is the reality so discouraging? Thanks for answering!:)
Unique material is king...and every so often, a screenwriter on the outside gives birth to a brilliant idea...so why not?
Everything has good and bad. If you want it bad enough, you can make it happen. However, I will say that you wear different hats. I wore 3 or so just today including my networking hat.
Did you live for movies as a kid? We all watched movies, but a small minority would watch 4 or 5 movies back to back and have seen certain films countless times. If you are not in that camp, I would say don't pursue it, it's not your calling.
Hi Ivo, Thanks for the network request. Glad to be connected. Patrizia www.imdb.me/patriziamilano
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Jennifer- You read other screenplays to improve your craft. Why not find the top 10 greatest films of all time? I would start with 'CASABLANCA'. "Here's looking at you kid".
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I would not read older scripts to pattern after. Read what's working now. Trends change. What was acceptable in the 30s or 40s doesn't always work for today. Read scripts that performed well, were cri...
Expand commentI would not read older scripts to pattern after. Read what's working now. Trends change. What was acceptable in the 30s or 40s doesn't always work for today. Read scripts that performed well, were critically applauded, and just well written for the genre you're writing in. If it's tv, get the pilot script for a show close to your genre. And remember, you're trying to catch the attention of the reader who will pass your script up the chain. If you're writing spec, write it for the reader. Don't write a shooting script. There's a huge difference. Write it to read. Make sure it's entertaining. Make sure it's as perfect as you can get it. And make sure it's not all passive tense. Make sure it works. I'm a student of Lew Hunter. Read Screenwriting 434. Lew taught me.. Learn from the best teachers out there. “Lew Hunter is the greatest screenwriting professor I’ve ever known.” -- Steven Spielberg.
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I think the scripts of films you enjoy the most.