May I get an opinion on using this AI platform as a first-review feedback mechanism? I'm hearing both "really good idea" and "reallllllly bad idea"!
May I get an opinion on using this AI platform as a first-review feedback mechanism? I'm hearing both "really good idea" and "reallllllly bad idea"!
Hello, everyone!
My name is Luciano Mello, a filmmaker and director of photography based in São Paulo, Brazil. I transitioned from commercial photography to filmmaking in 2014 and have been a member of Stage 32 since 2017. During this time, I've presented several projects and actively participated in...
Expand postHello, everyone!
My name is Luciano Mello, a filmmaker and director of photography based in São Paulo, Brazil. I transitioned from commercial photography to filmmaking in 2014 and have been a member of Stage 32 since 2017. During this time, I've presented several projects and actively participated in Pitch Tank and Pitch Practice sessions whenever possible. I've produced a few short films and am currently working on an animated series titled "The Pigeons' Revolution." Occasionally, I write about the audiovisual market, embracing a subversive spirit and enjoying the challenge of questioning formulas and rules. I would love to connect with artists worldwide who believe in Independent filmmaking.
Feel free to check out my profile and loglines here on Stage 32,: If you like what you see, don't hesitate to add me
Luciano Mello happy Introduce yourself week. I agree with Maurice Vaughan
Thanks, Jordan Smith and Maurice Vaughan. I'm producing already, putting the bibble together, the goal is to make a pilot at least an animatic, applying for some grants this year, and also maybe crowd...
Expand commentThanks, Jordan Smith and Maurice Vaughan. I'm producing already, putting the bibble together, the goal is to make a pilot at least an animatic, applying for some grants this year, and also maybe crowdfunding to finance this and see what happens, I'm also starting to pitch around. The poster is inspire by old revolutionary posters.
You're welcome, Luciano Mello. That sounds great! I hope you get the grants! Let us know if you start a crowdfunding campaign.
The Pigeon Revolution
So my pilot screenplay originally written in Portuguese is now translated to english.
check here if you want to read an action/comedy about pigeons.
https://www.stage32.com/loglines/55384...
Expand postThe Pigeon Revolution
So my pilot screenplay originally written in Portuguese is now translated to english.
check here if you want to read an action/comedy about pigeons.
It was made in Blender an open-source free software. It had a very small crew compared to most animated features. Voice talent typically does not get paid much for animated films (not as much as actin...
Expand commentIt was made in Blender an open-source free software. It had a very small crew compared to most animated features. Voice talent typically does not get paid much for animated films (not as much as acting scale). But yes, that certainly helped. The writer was also the director, producer, composer, editor and art director (plus many other roles). Those are ATL costs that were all saved. However, the reality is the major studios animated films are way overblown on budget. So the truth is, most animated features can be made at a fraction of the cost.
Here's an interview with the filmmaker -- entirely self taught. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LAz7tS1b68s
Thank you for posting this Laurie Ashbourne
I'm from Brazil, and as a proud Brazilian, I want to share the screenplay for the film I'm Still Here in English (originally written in Portuguese)
This screenplay is based on the book and tells the story of Eunice Paiva, wri...
Expand postI'm from Brazil, and as a proud Brazilian, I want to share the screenplay for the film I'm Still Here in English (originally written in Portuguese)
https://www.sonyclassics.com/assets/screenplays/imstillhere/imstillhere-...
This screenplay is based on the book and tells the story of Eunice Paiva, written by her son, Marcelo Rubens Paiva. It explores the tragic events surrounding the disappearance of her husband during Brazil's military dictatorship. The script took seven years to complete before the film was finally made.
I’d love to hear your thoughts on it! Have any of you seen the film?
I haven't seen I'm Still Here, but it's on my watch list, Luciano Mello. I'm looking forward to watching the film and reading the script.
Luciano Mello , thanks for sharing this script.
This is awesome! thank you for sharing. Brasil and its people share a special place in my heart, as I’ve volunteered in the favelas six times, just outside Rio. It’s like a second home. When I saw the...
Expand commentThis is awesome! thank you for sharing. Brasil and its people share a special place in my heart, as I’ve volunteered in the favelas six times, just outside Rio. It’s like a second home. When I saw the film at VIFF last November, in a theatre full of Brazilians living in Vancouver, Canada… it was a moment I will never forget. Emotional. Raw. Palpable. One of the best films I have seen in years, and I jumped up when it won best international film. Vamossss Brasil!
Ever get an idea that just won’t let go? How do you guys decide which ideas to chase and which to leave behind lol ?
Mark Deuce your on your pokemon go shyttttt lol
Eric Christopherson That makes a lot of sense—if an idea sticks with you, it’s probably worth chasing. I love that Coppola insight too; the best stories always seem to spark strong reactions. Do you h...
Expand commentEric Christopherson That makes a lot of sense—if an idea sticks with you, it’s probably worth chasing. I love that Coppola insight too; the best stories always seem to spark strong reactions. Do you have a project where you’ve noticed that kind of response?
Howard Koor agree !! i notice when i write stuff for people and help ghost write i dont get as motivated ! it feels like work and then i just get turned off
Good morning, yesterday there was an in depth discussion about the pitches here on Stage32 in re: to script and meeting requests. I'm wondering with those of you who have had meetings with execs, what was the outcome? Was it more educational or were they really interested in your project? Have there been any sales? Thx!
Your odds are extremely small. Even if you had the most incredible personal into, then you had the most amazingly executed script, what are the odds that 1 person you are pitching has the pull to actu...
Expand commentYour odds are extremely small. Even if you had the most incredible personal into, then you had the most amazingly executed script, what are the odds that 1 person you are pitching has the pull to actually green light budget, get the right actors, director, and make the film and then distribute it? This last year also saw major down turns in production and tons of writers and other people in film getting no work. People with lengthy careers threw in the towel because they couldn't afford to go out of work for so long. I don't want to discourage you but just trying to paint the picture that in order for anyone to get a deal right now there's a lot that has to go right.
No Robert, that's not discouraging at all!! haha. We can still write. Do you continue writing know this?
In my experience with pitches on Stage 32, I’ve only received feedback and got one request that ended with no interest.
I view pitching from a slightly different perspective. The notion of a 'gatekeepe...
Expand commentIn my experience with pitches on Stage 32, I’ve only received feedback and got one request that ended with no interest.
I view pitching from a slightly different perspective. The notion of a 'gatekeeper' who can unlock opportunities feels somewhat distant, especially in contexts like Brazil, where pitching is rarely the first point of contact. As a filmmaker, my experience has shown that projects are typically submitted beforehand, with the process heavily centered on securing funding. Frankly, the odds of success are slim, and the costs are high. I don’t believe pitching should be treated as a career strategy in any form—even if you do your research and target executives who work with projects like yours, pitching often feels more like a lottery.
We must also confront a truth: executives are often poor judges of scripts or projects. Many prioritize what their companies or clients demand, aligning with industrialized metrics rather than artistic merit. How often have we wondered how certain films got made? (What is okay? The Joblo channel on YouTube has wonderful stories that answer this question!) Executives invariably evaluate projects through a commercial lens, comparing them to pre-existing successes to fit market trends. But filmmaking is an art, inherently subjective. Can you imagine David Lynch pitching Eraserhead in a boardroom?
This brings to mind Paul Schrader’s quote: 'A screenwriter is half a filmmaker... But it is not an art form, because screenplays are not works of art. They are invitations to others to collaborate on a work of art.' For this reason, I advocate for alternative paths seeking partnerships with directors or actors, producing independently of market expectations, and submitting work to festivals. While not easy, this approach prioritizes the creative and collaborative process.
That said, for me, pitching should be reframed not as a transactional sales process but as a chance to improve storytelling skills. Every pitch forces you to convince others, and future collaborators of your vision, offering valuable feedback. Regardless of the outcome, observing reactions, whether visceral or technical, helps me refine the narrative. While success is unpredictable and expectations must be managed, the act of pitching itself is educational. Embrace it: tell your story, and who knows where it might lead.
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Lynelle Paulick and to all the people reading this blog. Based on my experience as a screenwriter and AI user, I can say that the future won’t be about creativity but about speed. In the sense that, g...
Expand commentLynelle Paulick and to all the people reading this blog. Based on my experience as a screenwriter and AI user, I can say that the future won’t be about creativity but about speed. In the sense that, given equal creative ability among screenwriters (with or without AI), the one who meets deadlines the fastest will be chosen. And when it comes to speed, artificial intelligence is truly an accelerator.
I was able to turn a 60-page film treatment into a 20-page screenplay outline in just half a day by using AI to condense the scenes. Of course, human supervision is and, in my opinion, will always remain essential.
Lynelle Paulick that's exactly where AI helps screenwriters as an assitant in timesavings with labor-intensive manual tasks.
I've saved hundreds of hours of manual effort in usng Text-to-Speech AI in t...
Expand commentLynelle Paulick that's exactly where AI helps screenwriters as an assitant in timesavings with labor-intensive manual tasks.
I've saved hundreds of hours of manual effort in usng Text-to-Speech AI in turning already completed original screenplays into recorded drama podcasts, to test drive scripts on an audience as "table reads," with https://youtu.be/hSFJDAxJYXU if you're interested.
Greg, I'll check this out! Will let you know. Thanks.