Authoring & Playwriting

For all the authors and playwrights in our community, a place to discuss, share content and post tips and advice.

Geoff Hall
Neil Gaiman on First Draft vs Last Draft

“What a good Question.” Says Neil Gaiman.

I like his answer to this question. The first draft is akin to throwing ideas like mud against a wall. The second draft is trying to show people that you knew what you are doing!

https://youtube.com/shorts/yg_dCY45s9o?si=CI2p8ihj3uGSf7_K...

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Leonardo Ramirez

I remember you using Evernote, Geoff Hall. I’ll have to take a look at Zoho but the more I think about it, the more I want to use physical notebooks. I think it would be neat for grandkids to see afte...

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Ashley Renee Smith

Thank you for sharing, Geoff Hall. I LOVE Neil!

Geoff Hall

Ashley Renee Smith have you watched The Sandman series on TV, Ashley? I’ve loved it and hope for a new series soon.

Geoff Hall

Leonardo Ramirez I use Zoho Notebook mostly when I’m researching a story and use the webclipper. It’s a great tool for pulling together resources, ideas and concepts.

Ashley Renee Smith

Geoff Hall, of course! I devoured it as soon as it was released. I also HIGHLY recommend The Sandman audiobook, both part 1 and 2. It's fantastic! Neil does the narration, but the characters are voice...

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Need a Laugh? Hilarious Critiquing Blunders

As you all know, an essential part of the writing process is getting feedback. It is so important to get other eyes on our work - we are typically too close to it to be able to look at it objectively by ourselves during the revision process, and it is always great to get other perspectives. That sai...

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Maurice Vaughan

Great points, Nancy Golden! And hilarious video! We can give notes/suggestions, but it's up to the people receiving the notes/suggestions to apply them or not.

William Joseph Hill

I love the whole "don't use adverbs" bit, Nancy Golden ! I've heard that critique before, it's like saying take all the salt out of your recipe, when having just the right amount of salt makes the dis...

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Melanie Lang
Faith-Based Screenplay Submission

I'm a first-time screenwriter and have a finished faith-based/drama manuscript. It is located on a small handful of sites, but I would like to know where to actually submit it to for interest in production. Who is looking for true stories, faith-based, female character-driven, etc. of this sort?

Bes...

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William Joseph Hill

Yes, what Tom & Mark says is good advice, Melanie. I would also add that getting an IMDBpro subscription will let you look at production companies with their contact info behind films in your target d...

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Melanie Lang

Tom Lapke, and William Joseph Hill I am working through locating the producers of some features in my genre that are well-done and locating them on my IMDBpro account. Mark Deuce, I am now in the Writ...

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Preston Poulter

I would love to take a look at your script, Melanie Lang

Cara Rogers

I took a faith-based/inspirational screenwriting lab through S32, taught by Nathan Scoggins. He's fantastic and might offer other services here. Also Brad Wilson periodically takes faith-based pitches...

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William Joseph Hill

Fantastic news, Melanie Lang - looks like you are taking all the right steps. Best of luck!

Jack Polo
Careers

Hello,

Jack Polo here. As a screenwriter, I've made the finals or won contests like Page, Fade In, NY Screenwriters, etc. As an author, I have seven books published by Black Rose Writing and TouchPoint Press.

That and six bucks will get you a Capp...

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DEATH IN PARAÍSO | IndieReader
DEATH IN PARAÍSO | IndieReader
DEATH IN PARAĺSO is a fun, nimble detective novel set in a sunny Southern California town that would be paradise ... if it weren't for too much murder.
John Roane

Jack:

I have four books out, traditionally published. Anyone who reads them likes them. I spend my royalty checks at Starbucks and have to add more money. Being an unknown author is depressing. Too much garbage out there.

Ashley Renee Smith
Today's Ask Me Anything with Joshua Young in the Writer's Room Lounge!

Hey, Writers!

Don't miss out on today's fantastic AMA with Joshua Young, Filmmaker, Video & Animatic Editor, and AI Consultant (Netflix, PBS, OWN, TLC, etc.) in the Writer's Room Lounge! Joshua is sharing his time with us to answer YOUR questions about "How To Use AI Tools as a Screenwriting Resource...

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Rob Tobin
Newbie open to good advice

Hey. I'm a veteran screenwriter and novelist, and I wrote a stageplay, something I'm NOT a veteran at. It's a rap musical without the actual music (I'm a poet, so I wrote the story and lyrics). It's edgy and controversial, set on January 6, 2021. Any advice on where to submit, how to proceed, or why...

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Leonardo Ramirez

Wow Rob Tobin - that's a tough one. I would look at it as any songwriter would. Consider taking it to a song publisher or an up and coming performer - one that is not tied to a label yet....

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Jared Michael Delaney

Hi Rob- I'm a playwright-- you may want to check out the NYC PLaywrights Blog. There's a lot of submissions possibilities there. Also, the Playwrights Center (which is in Minneapolis, but has a good w...

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Rob Tobin

Thanks, Jared!

Ashley Renee Smith
EDITING YOUR NOVEL- What To Do When You're Stuck

Hey All,

Earlier this week, I watched this great video from author Sara Cannon, sharing her Top 10 Tips for Figuring out how to Edit Your Novel when you’re stuck. She gets really detailed with her insights, focusing on the best ways to edit a first draft so that it's ready for a more in-depth polish...

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Maurice Vaughan

I like to break down rewrites/edits into categories when I'm working on a script, Ashley Renee Smith. A Story rewrite, B Story rewrite, subplots, dialogue, etc. If something isn't working in a script,...

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William Joseph Hill

This is great, Ashley Renee Smith ! For myself, I'm used to rewrites when it comes to screenplays, so editing a novel is a natural process. But I would say that it's harder with a novel because the st...

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Ashley Renee Smith

I like how you break it up by categories Maurice Vaughan. Alternative versions of scenes is a really good idea also!

Ashley Renee Smith

I agree with you that the structures of a novel are the harder obstacle to overcome when you’re used to the straightforward formatting of a script. I’m glad that you enjoyed Sarra’s tips, William Jose...

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Rom-Com Discussion

Hello Stage 32 Community! My name is Ivan Scott and I am an Indie Author in Atlanta.

I have five RomCom/Romance books published and another to be released in October of 2024.

I would like to meet more authors/screenwriters/playwrights who produce RomCom stories, so please feel free to reach out so w...

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Pamela Jaye Smith

Good point, RB, about the ups and downs of trends. My ROMANTIC COMEDIES Film Guidebook was published in 2017 by Michael Wiese Productions; we were all pleased to see a revival of the rom-com. Research...

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Pamela Jaye Smith

Ivan, congratulations on your accomplishments so far. May you have continuing and increasing success with your romantic comedies.

Richard "RB" Botto

I'm sure that guidebook is even more relevant today, Pamela Jaye Smith!

William Joseph Hill

That's cool that you've published five books already -- I myself write in the action/sci-fi space, but I am very impressed with that amount of work you've written!

Ivan Scott

Thanks, William! I appreciate your kind words. How is your writing coming along? I have always felt us Indies are all in this together so keep those books coming out my friend!

Lesley Fisher - Fantasy Author

Hi everyone, my name is Lesley Fisher a fantasy writer from Canada, and I am looking to put my book, The Object of Balance into film. I have a screenplay, logline and treatment made and I am also looking for an agent that would like to take me on. If anyone out there has any advice on how to get this done it would well appreciated. .

Daniel J. Barnes
Representation

Hi all,

I’m Dan, a self publishing author from the U.K. and I’m looking for an agent who has connections with reputable companies within the movie and tv industry about getting my novels onto the screen.

I have adapted one of them into a screenplay.

I’m finding it very difficult to get anywhere without...

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Mary Rice

Try Brower Literary & Management in New York. They have a division that represents self published authors. There is still a query process, but I don’t know exactly how it works, or how difficult it is...

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Miroslavas Siniavskis

WGA and SAG-AFTRA franchised agents list can be the best way to go. You will have a third-parted contract with many guaranteed rights like minimum agreement, payment for every rewrite, interest rates. Agencies in Los Angeles should have connections with biggest cinema companies.

Daniel J. Barnes
Daniel J. Barnes

Thank you @Miroslavas & @Mary for your help

Ashley Renee Smith
How to Make an Author Newsletter!

Hey, Authors!

Check out this great video with tips for starting your own Author Newsletter, a crucial marketing tool for any self-publishing author!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l3qq7ZUxJRs

Ashley Renee Smith

You're so welcome, Mark Deuce! I'm glad that you find it helpful!

William Joseph Hill

This is great, Ashley Renee Smith . I myself use an app called StoryOrigin which helps with creating reader magnets, newsletter swaps (where you exchange promoting other authors' books and they promot...

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Richard "RB" Botto

Absolutely right, Ashley Renee Smith. It's a go-to crowdsourcing tool.

Ashley Renee Smith

I hadn't heard of StoryOrigin, William Joseph Hill. It sounds like a great resource of tools!

Leonardo Ramirez

She's absolutely right Ashley Renee Smith. And I think the biggest hurdle (for me) was getting past the belief that no one wants to read it. Not true at all. I have followers on mine that I'm surprise...

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Mark Deuce

I will check this one out Pat Alexander and THANK YOU!

Richard "RB" Botto

Nice share, Pat Alexander. Loved this line: "But the thing about screenwriting that's interesting is that everybody wants to talk about what you're doing, like, four years after you did it."

Embrace th...

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