Hello. My name is Chase Carmichael.
I'm currently working on the bottle pilot episode for my pre-development concept.
However, as I am resting with severe allergies today. I thought of myself, what would be the best theme for an animation concept of my choice.
If I want to create a concept that targets younger male audiences (boys who are ages 7-12), then I would absolutely think of two or three ideas:
First idea: A rogue of good pirates seek to gain respect, teamwork, friendship, and resiliency to fight against the greedy corrupt pirates who keeps stealing precious items and coins from other Islanders in a travel around the islands. A fantasy, adventure animation.
Second idea: A misunderstood space pilots who fights for acceptance, teamwork, and discovering planets before they encountered a malicious corrupt space emperors who would tried to invade the planet and turn them into dystopian nightmarish planets if they don't protect and save them. Science-fiction, dramedy animation.
Third idea: The former thieves who are willing to give up doing heist plans and ends up become detectives who knew about their actions of stealing or manipulating business people and they must stop the greedy mercenaries and corrupt businessmen who always believes money and power is everything. Mystery but fun and safe, action/adventure, comedy animation.
These are my story ideas that will target younger male audiences.
And if I want the concepts to target younger female audiences (girls who are ages 7-12), then I would think of two ideas
First Idea: A rebellious princess and a sarcastic adventurer team up on the search of the ancient spells that will help out other villagers who are struggling to live up to their expectations or adventurers who would need to be feel accepted and shariing their emotions while trying to collect the spells and face the heartless sorcerer. Musical, fantasy, comedy animation.
Second idea: Two rabbit sisters are willing to help out on other girls with their appearance or their imaginations or even discuss their boy crushes. Coming-of-age, comedy animation.
That's all I can think of potentially on these two concepts but it has to be targeting different types of younger audiences. But right now, I'm busy on focusing on the current concept.
Which one does it best? Let's discuss it. One more thing: The world-setting has to be anthropomorphic animals only, no humans.
If you are a writer, which concepts do you prefer?
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I love stories like this where the lines between what's right, what's wrong and what's human conflict each other. This feels like it would make for a very relevant and epic story. The images definitely convey the scale and despair and the buried history.
Kevin Jackson In fact the movie drinks a lot from orwellian concepts of a distopia, but adapted for families, which is already pretty hard, as you can see it doesn't loose the suffocating atmoshpere,...
Expand commentKevin Jackson In fact the movie drinks a lot from orwellian concepts of a distopia, but adapted for families, which is already pretty hard, as you can see it doesn't loose the suffocating atmoshpere, but still remains a vast an hopefull world where freedom seems more like privilege than a right, specialy for the main Character an hyperactive disabled boy who can't literaly run due to a malformation in his leg and can't even run inside his mind, and Armstrong, the robot, who just learns about life imitating this strange and unadapted little boy.
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Alex Olguin, I actually came across Armstrong-D.U. during the voting recently and really liked it, so it’s interesting to see how you’re visualizing the world now.
The contrast between control and some...
Expand commentAlex Olguin, I actually came across Armstrong-D.U. during the voting recently and really liked it, so it’s interesting to see how you’re visualizing the world now.
The contrast between control and something buried underneath comes through strongly — it feels structured on the surface, but quietly unsettling underneath.
Living in that kind of system feels like it would be safe, but also restrictive in a way you might not fully notice at first.
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Ayesha Simra Thank you, I'm glad it works so well. I mainly want to use all this art and concepts as guidance for the real artists and these coments help a lot to iterate for new visual concepts to ma...
Expand commentAyesha Simra Thank you, I'm glad it works so well. I mainly want to use all this art and concepts as guidance for the real artists and these coments help a lot to iterate for new visual concepts to make the world clearer.
About the voting... yes! I still can't believe I0ve gotten so far with this, specialy since Armstrong-D.U. is the only animated feature in the contest in Kinolime. I really hope I make it to the last 10 and then to the final 3.
Thanks for all the support, and the comment. They help a lot.
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Alex Olguin, That makes sense, using it as a foundation for real artists. It already feels very cohesive as a world.
And honestly, getting that far with an animated feature is impressive, especially since it stands out from the rest. Hope it makes it to the final round. Best of luck!