Phil Clarke: Screenwriter, script consultant and story analyst in London, England.

Hello to all

Hi, I am new here and wanted to say a quick hello. I am aspiring to bring my movie pitch to life. In the process of writing up a synopsis and also making networks the best way possible. Looking forward to using this platform. All the best!

Sheldon Kaplan

hi Aaron: I too am a screenwriter with aspirations that I can get a manager for one of my scripts. would like to discuss the challenges in this adventure with you. Sheldon Kaplan

Ashley Renee Smith

Welcome to Stage 32, Aaron Traikovski! We’re so glad you’re here and taking those first exciting steps toward bringing your movie pitch to life. Crafting a strong synopsis and building your network ar...

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Sam Rivera

Welcome Aaron Traikovski! Great have you on with us!

Lynelle Paulick
Using ChatGPT for screenplay feedback??

May I get an opinion on using this AI platform as a first-review feedback mechanism? I'm hearing both "really good idea" and "reallllllly bad idea"!

Emanuele Vergari

Lynelle Paulick and to all the people reading this blog. Based on my experience as a screenwriter and AI user, I can say that the future won’t be about creativity but about speed. In the sense that, g...

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Greg Mandanis

Lynelle Paulick that's exactly where AI helps screenwriters as an assitant in timesavings with labor-intensive manual tasks.

I've saved hundreds of hours of manual effort in usng Text-to-Speech AI in t...

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Lynelle Paulick

Greg, I'll check this out! Will let you know. Thanks.

Joe Fox
Dark Drama & Sci-Fi Explorer: A hello from a Writer-Actor Shining Light on the Human Psyche.

I’m a storyteller who thrives on dark drama and sci-fi, endlessly curious about how the human psyche meets futuristic twists. These genres let me explore the shadows we carry, while also asking some big questions about what tomorrow’s technology might bring. My own mental health journey has shown me...

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Sam Rivera

What an intro Joe Fox! It's great to meet you and love what you had to say about the human pscyhe!

Joe Fox

Thank you to everyone for being so welcoming!

Pat Savage

Welcome to our vast Stage32 international family of creatives! Happy networking!

George Anderson
Aspiring Filmmaker/Screenwriter

Hello all! My name is George, and I am an aspiring filmmaker and screenwriter. In late 2022 I made a no-budget feature documentary I uploaded to YouTube, and have been writing ever since. I have five feature scripts completed in a variety of genres, from romance to thriller to comedy and horror.

I f...

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Maurice Vaughan

Hi, George Anderson. Hope you're having a great day! We're connected on here, but I think this is the first time we've spoken. Nice to meet you! I just watched the Play for Views trailer. It looks int...

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Phil Clarke

Welcome, George. Here if I can ever be of any support.

Presentation

Hey, I'm new on the platform, I'm a spiritual and psychological book writer, I've flirted with writing since I was a child, I've been writing film scripts since 2010, I try to have the best achievements, if I can get close to perfection, I want to surpass it. a little while ago I made the decision t...

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Pat Savage

Hi Gradinariu Petru-pavel welcome to our Stage 32 Community and happy networking!

Gradinariu Petru-pavel

Congratulations to everyone for their hard work and talent. I discovered a new world knowing the users of this platform. I promise you that I will write so many screenplays until at least one reaches Hollywood. I know my potential and I have total confidence in our audience.

Kat Spencer

Wecome Gradinariu Petru-pavel! So nice to have your energy here :)

John Mezes
For my fellow scribes!!!

What’s the Best Screenwriting Advice You’ve Ever Received? Let's chat!

John Mezes

Too true, John C. Bounds! Just write is a great note, because how else does it get done? Prepping for a script is important, but it's the groundwork, and not supposed to consume all of your time. Writ...

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John Mezes

You got it, Pamela De Nicolo! Aspects of your script should drive it to its goal and conclusion. Filler materials with no direct association will be edited out eventually, by you if you edit yourself...

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John Mezes

I echo that oldy, but goody note, Francisco Castro!

Jane Nolan
Top o the morning.....

No one in Ireland says this! Hi everyone. I've come late-ish to screenwriting but the upshot is a bank of tales ready to tell. In my first year I've written a radio play and a screenplay about, among other things, the ancient and crazy Irish game of Hurling. 3 other scripts careening around my softw...

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Steven R Mitchell

Keep us posted Jane!!

Jane Nolan

Will do Steven!

Daniel Geesen

Welcome to the platform, Jane!

Brittany H
Looking for a buddy

Hey everyone!

As I’m beginning to push myself back into the groove of screenwriting I’ve been toying with the idea of finding a buddy who I could share a screenwriting connection with- someone to touch base with for accountability purposes. Even if it’s periodic I believe it would be beneficial to ha...

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Phil Clarke

Hi Brittany. I always try to make myself available to act as a support to any writer out there, so feel free to message me if you need someone to talk to.

Donny Woo

Hi Brittany, I would love to discuss and support any fellow writer out there. Please let me know if you need one.

Jing-Xiang Zhang

Hi, Brittany, I’d be happy to collaborate with you by all means. If you’re interested then let’s discuss more details. Have a good day!

Megan Reneau
Descriptive

Hey, I was wondering if any writers could answer a question for me. I am new at scriptwriting. While between character convo. I like to break down the scene descriptively on what's going on in the scene. Someone pointed out that I am writing too much description/blocking and that it could stall the...

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Andreas Miliaressis

Hi Meagan. I completed a course in screenwriting, what I learnt is what Marc and Francisco mentioned. Less is best. And what Marc mentioned in his comment "Don’t direct the director and don’t coach th...

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Zahra Mazhari

Every element in a film should serve the story. If something contributes to a new layer of narrative discovery, it must be explicitly stated. Otherwise, we leave room for the director’s vision. Even t...

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Omair Saidi

I agree with Zahra's vision!!

Thomas Cummins
Screenplay feedback.

best place to get feedback on full scripts?

Jill Godley

Are you looking for peer or professional? Is it a rough draft or are you looking for that Pass, Consider, Recommend? If it is rougher and you need feedback on story then I recommend going with Peer- W...

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Sam Rivera

If you're ever looking for feedback, I highly suggest reaching out to success@stage32.com where they can suggest of Stage 32 best feedback script reads! Personally, I think notes feedback and consulta...

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Ewan Dunbar

Script services here is a good place to start. You can choose from people actually working in the industry in different fields to find someone that can give feedback relevant to you.

Thomas Cummins
I’ve read my script so much idk if it’s good or makes sense anymore.

is this normal? and what do you do to combat this?

Barry McDivitt

I'm gradually compiling a group of like-minded beta readers who aren't afraid to give, and get, honest feedback (for free). It may be worth finding out what other people think of your script. Tell them not to pull any punches.

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

It’s very normal and happens with all art forms. Just take a break from it for a while, like a month or so, and when you come back you can see it with clearer eyes. You mainly feel that way right now because you’re still deeply connected to your work :)

Kizzy Lee

Sometimes, it can be helpful to have someone else read things back to you. I find that it helps me reignite with the piece. If you have someone you trust who is a good speaker and adapts well with storytelling, have them read it to you like they are acting it out for you. Hope this helps :)

Hello!

Hi Stage32 community! My name is Luna, I am a music video director who is slowly navigating to the world of narratives.

Currently writing and planning to direct my first short film.

I am looking forward to meeting fellow creatives here and learning from all of you!

Maurice Vaughan

What about saying something like "It's a Dystopian FARGO," Luna Al Masri?

Luna Al Masri

thanks Phil Clarke ! Might take you up on that!

Phil Clarke

Luna Al Masri Anytime!

Göran Johansson
Scam or serious?

I found the following in my junk mail folder (from contact@glcoverage.com) :

Big things are happening at Greenlight Coverage! As we continue improving our script analysis and feedback tools, we want to give you a final chance to lock in your current subscription rate before prices increase by $10/mon...

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Phil Clarke

If I am right, they are an AI feedback company.

Phil Clarke

It's always nice to have someone write something nice about what you do.

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